For A, B, C's of Emotions

Letter H

Emotion used? Not really sure, but Hysterical works. Feel free to suggest the one from the list you think fits!

Allusions to certain characters, types, areas, etc. are from World of Warcraft, via Blizzard.

The song that inspired this piece is, without a doubt, Fuckin' Perfect by Pink. Sorry if the title offends, but I have found that looking past the offensive and into the deeper meaning of the song, especially this one, makes it speak louder. This is also the censored version linked, for those who dislike the word 'fuck.'

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For those who would like to know what I wish for advice on, here's a couple of questions. Do her actions and emotions flow together? Is the dream sequence at the end distinct enough to show it's a different thought process? Are there any obvious grammar errors?